shiina
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Post by shiina on Oct 19, 2009 20:06:13 GMT -5
|TITLE| Carnival |RATING| PG |THEME| Horror |NOTES| This is kinda short, but... heehee. I wrote this after the Fall Festival Friday (alliteration XD Love it!) I love the rain, and I love Halloween, so I wrote a Halloween poem and added in the atmosphere of the darkness and the rain.
Clowns in cheery black make-up dressed in blood-splashed white, Their lovely gray tent invites me inside to the dim and lonely light, Where he waits, nineteen and glowing, waiting just for me. A smile like a wolf that chills my bones and I run out to a new scene. All light is gone from the tragic land where the proud sun once shone, And I look around and tell myself, "The Carnival's in town."
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Post by xunpredictablel on Oct 22, 2009 15:07:24 GMT -5
Oh my, I liked it quite a bit. Some hidden meanings to this one , curious and alluring. It was nice. A dark twist on the carnival, as many like to do. I liked it. It was short and to the point but good.
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Post by shiina on Oct 23, 2009 18:13:53 GMT -5
thanks *weak smile* sorry, not hyper today. J'ai mal a la tete.
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