The Insane Legend

[shiina]

|TITLE| The Insane Legend
|RATING| G
|THEME| Humor
|NOTES| This poem will no doubt be proof to all of you that I am completely and irreversibly insane. For those of you who don't know, I'm only 15, so don't be shocked by this poem.


Hot cocoa and black and white cartoons,
a pin needle an 100 balloons.
It's not hard to entertain us.
two whole pizzas, and we want more.
Fighting over the last piece, wrestling on the floor.
Do we ever get full?
You had suction cup shoes, and I had shoes that flew.
Geeze, if we weren't best friends, I would HATE you.
one nicknamed Fayte, Another Kitty,
A third as Kiki, and don't forget Chippy,
and last but not least, Momo.
Five inseprable best, best friends,
it's not until they're all dead that the insane legend ends.
And even then it's not over O.o

[ANNARR IS ZEE GREATEST ?!]

I LOVES IT!
I mean, I can relate to the violence thing, my best friends and I hurt each other but we love each other.
Actually. I jut have insane mood swings and hit my best friends, then cry while apologising. but whatever.
This is more lighthearted than a flutterby.
BRAVO!

[xunpredictablel]

Haha, this is very cute. It's kind of like a comic relief in a really intense movie. There's not much to say about this one, but I do like the rhymes and the funny ideas. It was fantastic. It's nice to see your happy side as well.

BTW : You are a fantastic author for your age. Keep it up and you'll get published someday.

[Alicia's Ghost]

Oh my xD That had me stifling laughter in class. Seriously. I recognized a name in there -- which only made it a little more entertaining. The little "O.o" at the end had me grinning

Yay for shiina. <3

[shiina]

You recognized one of the names? Really? Well, that shouldn't shock me actually, I've gotten so used to calling them by their nicknames... I'm Fayte, Katrina is Kitty, Katie is Kiki, Kayla is Chippy, and Ashley is Momo. ^.^ And our principal came into my class one day talking about Gang activity, and the way she described gangs, then my friends and I are technically a gang XD I have another hilarious poem to put up today... not as funny, but I like it. ^.^ ANd thank you very much, all three of you.