shiina
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Post by shiina on Oct 4, 2009 14:31:31 GMT -5
|TITLE| Smile for Me |RATING| PG13 |THEME| Sadness (best I can think of) |NOTES| I wrote this like, 5 minutes ago. A lot on my mind right now, Katrina knows what I'm being bothered by, and she thinks I'm overreacting, heck, I know I am too, but I can't help it. This has nothing to do with my problem on hand though, And I have no clue what inspired it. I'm so weird.
Smile for me, Bigger and bigger. Laugh for me, harder and harder. Kiss me, sweeter and sweeter. love me, longer and longer. scream for me, louder and louder. cry for me, sadder and sadder. Hate me, madder and madder. Live for me, Against your will. Die for me, I know you will.
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Post by Sàmmius McGennien on Oct 4, 2009 15:48:33 GMT -5
It's absolutely beautiful. It flows so rhythmically, it comes together like thread, and it just makes perfect sense. I mean, poetry tends to have hidden messages that aren't always evident on the outside (hence the hidden part ), but it's not some sort of jumbled garbage that someone just threw together to have something. It's very deep and even somewhat inspirational. I love it. I'm always here if you need to talk!
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shiina
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Post by shiina on Oct 4, 2009 17:21:31 GMT -5
Merci beaucoup! Glad you like it
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