And we live.

[kitty]

|And we live.|
|PG|
|Life|
|i REALLY like this one! i hope you do too!|

Life is a rollar coaster.
Some people love it,
Some people hate it,
and some people dont give a crap.

It has bumps,
climbs,
drops,
flips,
twists,
and turns.
Its rarely straight.
You never have control,
not even when you think you do.

You hate some parts of the ride
And love others.
Like when,
your going high-speed,
and feel more alive than you have in a long time.

Some people,
People who hate the rollar coaster
We call Life,
get high on Crack,
Weed,
Drugs,
Pills.

Other people,
People that love the rollar coaster
We call Life,
get high on life.

The rest just stay normal
They never get any joy out of life,
but they also never get depressed,
Or terrified.

But we,
The ones who love life,
We just go with the flow.
We take to bumbs in the road,
and the drops,
and the tough climbs,
all in stride.
And we live.

[xunpredictablel]

Ah, and here we see your growth as a writer. This poem is very very thorough and it begins describing things better than some of your other ones. You could still use different words to replace the more common ones, but it seems like it was effortlessly written, something like those "Gosh, you make it look so easy" kind of things. I like the ideas, how the ones who love life just go with the flow and roll with the punches. I liked your references to drugs and such , although I doubt they completely HATE life. I like how you shaped your ideas in this one .

The ending sentence is good , it sums up the poem well.

[shiina]

Love this one I love life AND roller coasters! AWESOME! ugh, j'ai mal a la tete. *tries to ignore headache* I really do love this one kitty-kins You don't give yourself enough credit. (I for one think you're better than Chippy. don't tell her I said that. Her demonic feelings will be hurt)

[kitty]

lol i wont. and thanks