Enemies

[kitty]

|enemies|
|PG|
|tragedy|
|uh... i think i was a LITTLE depressed at the time i wrote this...|

Enemies.
Who are they?
Enemies are friends,
who stabbed you in the back.
and friends,
who twisted the knife.

They are the people that hate you,
because of who you're friends with
and people who hate you,
for no reason
at all.

Those are enemies.

[xunpredictablel]

This poem was pretty good, a little too short. Try to create more depth to your poems : kind of a 3D thing. I live by something my father said about writing : "Have it leaving your reader guessing- make them think about it deeply and relate it to their life." While not all poets follow this, I think it's a good thing to have in mind.

I like how you stated how enemies are basically ex friends. It's true. It's a very simple, very true poem. Good job.

[shiina]

I don't like this one... it's about me...

[kitty]

hehe... sorrryyyy

[shiina]

S'okay. I still wuv yoo!!