Wonderland

[shiina]

|TITLE| Wonderland
|RATING| PG
|THEME| Fantasy
|NOTES| That's right, I wrote a poem about Alice in Wonderland. Guess I just got bored... *giggles* look at the last words of the first four lines and the last four lines


No sweet words, no helping hand,
no crutch that's here to help me stand.
Put my feet in softer sand,
take me into Wonderland.

The Queen of Hearts, She knows love,
she spies her land from far above.
She's shown Her care, each time She's said,
"Come now, Gaurds, off with his head!"

Should I just stay right here and wait?
Is there really someplace else to go?
Standing near the Wonderland gate,
there's some things that I should not know.

"Eat me," "drink me," what to do?
You think that I should trust in who?
The rabbit's late, his watch in paw,
do I believe in what I saw?

being shoved by your cruel hand,
I have no clue just where I stand.
I'm standing here in razor sand,
get me out of Wonderland.

[kitty]

haha awesome

[xunpredictablel]

Okay, I really enjoyed this poem. I'll write more when I have some more time, but it was really, truly incredible.

I very much enjoyed it, it was a GREAT read.

I'll reply again soon.

[Panda]

This poem is just so fun to read! You can put it with just about any tune. You could send it to Jonny Depp and have him sing it in the credits of the new movie! but it really is a good peom, great job.

[shiina]

Thank you.

[Panda]

I will get to commenting on your others eventualy, but I have read them