Post by Chippy on Aug 3, 2010 16:17:00 GMT -5
I know this poem needs work...any suggestions?
I hear them calling,
I see them near
Their presense never falling
As they call me here.
The river is streaming
As it becomes three.
The birds are all singing
As they nest in the tree.
Sleeping beneath the brush
Are three little fawns.
As they begin to hush
The forest begins its songs.
'Little human, so new here,
So young in her age.
Little human, do you hear
The bears in their cave.
Little human, sing with us,
Im sure you can sing.
Little human, you're beautiful
In the cover of spring.'
I hear them calling,
I see them near
Their presense never falling
As they call me here.
The river is streaming
As it becomes three.
The birds are all singing
As they nest in the tree.
Sleeping beneath the brush
Are three little fawns.
As they begin to hush
The forest begins its songs.
'Little human, so new here,
So young in her age.
Little human, do you hear
The bears in their cave.
Little human, sing with us,
Im sure you can sing.
Little human, you're beautiful
In the cover of spring.'