shiina
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Ghost
Aug 8, 2010 13:39:45 GMT -5
Post by shiina on Aug 8, 2010 13:39:45 GMT -5
Fade in, fade out, A friend who's not there. So small, so big, You're everywhere. Hide me, find me, My spirit of love. Break me, fix me, You're more than enough. Climb up, fall down, Never to feel. Outer, inner, Who knows what's real? Leave me, seek me, Come to my aid. Hurt me, help me, But I can't be saved. To win, to lose, What you love most. Chase me, catch me, But you're just a ghost. My future, my past, It's all just a fog. My lover, my killer, My angel gone wrong.
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shiina
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Posts: 186
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Ghost
Aug 8, 2010 13:40:27 GMT -5
Post by shiina on Aug 8, 2010 13:40:27 GMT -5
I forgot the critique CRITIQUE:: Go for it!
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