Post by shiina on Jul 18, 2010 22:49:05 GMT -5
NOTES:: This is an edited version of a poem that I previously had posted. I think it's much better haha. and I wrote this before the movie was ever being advertised 
I loved Alice in Wonderland before that new movie.
CRITIQUE:: Hit me with everything you've got, I feel like I could use a few pointers on some things. I won't cry, haha.
No sweet words, no helping hand,
No crutch that's here to help me stand.
Put my feet in softer sand,
And take me into Wonderland.
The Queen of Hearts; she knows love.
She spies her land from far above.
She's shown her care each time she's said
"Come now, gaurds, off with his head."
Playing cards is always fun
With Tweedle-Dee and Tweedle-Dum,
A smiling cat with purple fur,
And one strange man; The Mad Hatter.
Where to go, what to do?
You think that I should trust in who?
The rabbit's late, his watch in paw.
Do I believe in what I saw?
Being shoved by your cruel hand,
I have no clue just where I stand.
My feet are slashed by razor sand.
Get me out of Wonderland.
I loved Alice in Wonderland before that new movie.CRITIQUE:: Hit me with everything you've got, I feel like I could use a few pointers on some things. I won't cry, haha.
No sweet words, no helping hand,
No crutch that's here to help me stand.
Put my feet in softer sand,
And take me into Wonderland.
The Queen of Hearts; she knows love.
She spies her land from far above.
She's shown her care each time she's said
"Come now, gaurds, off with his head."
Playing cards is always fun
With Tweedle-Dee and Tweedle-Dum,
A smiling cat with purple fur,
And one strange man; The Mad Hatter.
Where to go, what to do?
You think that I should trust in who?
The rabbit's late, his watch in paw.
Do I believe in what I saw?
Being shoved by your cruel hand,
I have no clue just where I stand.
My feet are slashed by razor sand.
Get me out of Wonderland.
