The nicest way

[Panda]

[Title] 'The nicest way
[Rating] G
[Critique] do your worst
[Notes] I have been gone for a while, so I feel like I owe the place a poem or two, and as many comments as time will allow. This poem is pretty self explanitory, and quite harsh if you dont read into it enough. Even when I was proofing it I had to stop and say "wow Im a douche bag" but that is part of the poem, and if you just read it word for word that is all you will get out of it. Luckily I am privillaged enough to have a captive aduience of amazing writers.

Another one gone, but by now there’re just toys.

They break, and they cry but I drown out the noise.

So what if I choose to kick back and have fun?

It’s not like I ever told you that you were the one.

It is true, so true, that I believe what I said,

so shoo, move on, and get out of my head.

So what if I choose to tell you this lie?

This is not the right time to start asking why!

I have come too far to be broken by you,

So this time it is me who has some breaking to do.

I will not take a chance, and fall in love today.

So for now it’s “I hate you.” But in a nice way.

[xunpredictablel]

LOOOOOVE it. My favorite line was the very last one - because it's so true and so fitting of so many situations . BEAUTIFUL rhymes and rhythm and this poem was very well written , with lots of words that seemed to fit into place like puzzles pieces . I think that, more than anything, the rhyme impresses me to every extent of the word. This is because I feel like, since rhyme is so hard to acquire and keep up with , the fact that you can do such a thing is invigorating and inspiring, since I can do no such thing myself.

Also, the thoughts behind it are kind of cynical and almost hurt, and confused. I suppose, anyway. I really understood everything you were trying to tell me and I loved it.