Post by Chippy on Sept 26, 2010 20:03:20 GMT -5
Critique-Whatever you feel like.
Drops falling from the great wide sky
Falling towards the blood soaked ground.
Death birds flying overhead
Just waiting to begin their feast.
Pushing through the bodies
Dodging past the blades
Looking for someone...
Who?
I know not...
In the distance, I see a great Dragon.
Black in color, dark in sheen
My heart races as he lifts his head
And stares into my eyes.
My memories flood back to me...
Memories from all lives past.
Then,
I see her. The one I searched for.
Running to her, I catch her as she falls
Feeling the sorrow of the Black Dragon mix with my own,
I turn. Her last breath gone.
Eyes change red.
I destroy the ones who killed her.
And those who helped...
I return to find my life destroyed.
Provoking the others, I meet my end.
To wait and wait and wait
Until we are born again...
Drops falling from the great wide sky
Falling towards the blood soaked ground.
Death birds flying overhead
Just waiting to begin their feast.
Pushing through the bodies
Dodging past the blades
Looking for someone...
Who?
I know not...
In the distance, I see a great Dragon.
Black in color, dark in sheen
My heart races as he lifts his head
And stares into my eyes.
My memories flood back to me...
Memories from all lives past.
Then,
I see her. The one I searched for.
Running to her, I catch her as she falls
Feeling the sorrow of the Black Dragon mix with my own,
I turn. Her last breath gone.
Eyes change red.
I destroy the ones who killed her.
And those who helped...
I return to find my life destroyed.
Provoking the others, I meet my end.
To wait and wait and wait
Until we are born again...